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An honest resume critique.
Not a ChatGPT rewrite.

Two voices read your resume. A senior in your field, and a recruiter who's screened ten thousand of them. You get a written critique back, specific to your document, in your inbox in minutes.

$3  ·  delivered by email  ·  typically under 10 minutes

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How it works
01

Upload your resume.

PDF or .docx. One file, up to 5MB.

02

We read it the way a hiring manager would.

No generic AI pep talk. You get a line-by-line read from someone who knows your function and someone who's screened thousands of resumes a year. Same critique, two angles.

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Check your inbox.

Usually ten minutes, sometimes faster. Nothing to log into. Nothing to cancel.

Critique, not a rewrite. You'll get detailed, specific action points and redlines. Most customers pair this with their preferred AI tool to finalize.

What's in the critique
Classification — Function, level, industry, plus one honest first-impression line.
What's working — Real strengths, stated briefly. We don't pad.
The AI-fingerprint audit — The bullets that could be on anyone's resume. Quoted back to you, with rewrites.
Function-specific depth check — What a hiring manager in your exact role expects to see, and where your resume is thin.
Quantification audit — What needs a number. What numbers are meaningless. What to do when you don't have the data.
Positioning — How the top third of page one is reading, plus a rewrite of your summary and lead bullet.
Formatting and ATS — The specific issues in your document, not generic rules you've already heard.
Redlines — Three to five before/after rewrites. Copy-paste them or use them as templates.
Priority order of fixes — If you only do three things this weekend, here's the list.

The critique runs 1,500 to 3,000 words. It's not a score or a grade. It's a written diagnosis, the kind a good mentor would give you if they had eight minutes and were willing to tell you the truth.

What the critique looks like

Three real examples. Click any to read inside.

These excerpts are truncated. The full critique you receive is considerably longer and more detailed.

Classification

Backend-leaning full-stack engineer, ~5.5 years of experience, currently positioned as senior IC with one stint of leading a 7-person team. Stack centers on Node.js/TypeScript and AWS, with India-market fintech exposure (lending workflows, e-mandate, account aggregator, credit bureau reporting, auto-debit).

What's Working

The fintech experience at Company 3 is the strongest material on the page. Account aggregator integrations, e-mandate providers, auto-debit logic, and credit bureau reporting are specific, regulated, non-trivial domains that hiring managers in Indian fintech recognize immediately. The PHP-to-Node migration is a real, hireable signal. Leading 7 developers at Company 4 is also concrete.

The Core Problem

Read these three opening verbs in sequence: "Designed, developed, and deployed APIs." "Implemented AWS SQS FIFO queues." "Regularly enhanced API performance." Now apply the swap-the-title test. Replace "Senior Full Stack Engineer" at Company 1 with "Backend Engineer at literally any Node.js shop." Do these three bullets still make sense? Yes. That's the diagnosis.

Redline Example

Before

"Migrated a legacy PHP backend to Node.js using Express.js, resulting in improved scalability and maintainability."

After

"Led migration of a [N-year-old] PHP lending backend to Node.js/Express, [N] endpoints over [N] months, using a strangler-fig pattern with traffic-shifted cutover (zero customer-facing downtime). Reduced p95 latency from [X]ms to [Y]ms and unblocked [specific feature work]."

Why

"Improved scalability and maintainability" is a claim. The rewrite gives the strategy, the scope, the safety of the rollout, and the measurable result — which is what a senior engineer is hired to demonstrate.

Priority Order of Fixes

  1. 1.

    Rewrite Company 3 entirely. Name the regulated systems (RBI AA, NPCI eMandate, CIBIL/Experian), describe the migration with strategy and numbers.

  2. 2.

    Replace the profile paragraph and lead bullet of your current role. The top third of the page is what gets you screened in or out in 8 seconds.

  3. 3.

    Put numbers, scope, or named systems on every bullet that doesn't have them. Rough estimates beat silence.

Full critique — including all redlines and detailed section analysis — delivered to your inbox.

Classification

Finance Manager / Senior Finance professional in the accounting and financial reporting track. Mix of corporate accounting, FP&A, and fund / investment management finance experience. Level: Mid-to-senior IC, edging toward small-team manager. Most recent and most distinctive experience is in private equity fund operations — the strongest differentiator on the page.

What's Working

The career arc is coherent: audit, then corporate accounting, then FP&A, then PE fund finance, then Finance Manager. The PE fund work (Fund III final close, Fund IV first close, SPV management, offshore Private Fund Laws filings) is genuinely differentiated and would interest the right hiring manager. The technical stack (HFM, Hyperion, Excel, multiple ERPs) is broad and useful.

The Core Problem

Every role is written as a list of responsibilities rather than accomplishments. Apply the swap-the-name test: "Responsible for daily accounting and finance operations, including payment preparation, monitoring cash flow, forecasting, management and financial reporting, and yearly budgeting." Swap this candidate's name for any of the other 400 finance managers a recruiter screened this month. The sentence still works perfectly. That's the failure.

Redline Example

Before

"Manage and maintain SPVs and fund manager in-house booking records, and yearly budget preparation for fund manager company."

After

"Maintained books for the GP entity and [X] SPVs across [Cayman / BVI / Singapore]; prepared the GP's annual budget ([$X]); reviewed quarterly NAV statements and audited financials prepared by [Fund Administrator] across [X] funds with combined committed capital of [$X]."

Why

Names the fund admin, the jurisdictions, the entity count, the AUM. This is the bullet that gets you the interview at the next PE shop.

Priority Order of Fixes

  1. 1.

    Add a summary and skills band at the top of page 1, and lead with the PE fund finance angle. Three lines of summary plus a skills band fixes this in 30 minutes.

  2. 2.

    Quantify Company 2 and Company 1. Fund sizes, LP counts, SPV counts, jurisdictions, AUM, fund admin name. These two roles are 80% of your hire-ability.

  3. 3.

    Strip the "Key Responsibilities" framing and rewrite every role as accomplishments. Each bullet should pass the test: would this still be true if you swapped my name for any other Finance Manager?

Full critique — including all redlines and detailed section analysis — delivered to your inbox.

Classification

B2B marketing generalist, roughly 4-5 years into your career, with experience in the SaaS or software space. Level-wise you're a strong mid-level IC: past coordinator, not yet manager, ready for a Senior Marketing Manager or Product Marketing Manager seat depending on which way you want to lean.

What's Working

"300% increase in LinkedIn followers," "100%+ website traffic growth," "30%+ sales increase over two years," "8+ new features showcased" — these are the kinds of numbers most marketers cannot produce on demand, and you have several. Your tool stack (Semrush, Webflow, Premiere Pro, Meta Business Suite) signals you actually do the work, not just brief it out.

The Core Problem

The phrase "integrated marketing campaigns" appears twice and means nothing both times. "Integrated" is a word marketers use when they don't want to commit to a specific motion. Were these demand-gen campaigns? Product launches? ABM plays? Brand awareness pushes? Each of those implies different goals, different metrics, different stakeholders, and different stories you should be telling.

Redline Example

Before

"Showcased 2 new software products and more than 8 new features within 2 years by meeting users' needs and market demand across multiple regional markets."

After

"Led GTM for 2 product launches and 8+ feature releases in the [vertical] space across [regions]. Owned positioning, messaging, launch content, and sales enablement; coordinated with PM, sales, and design. [Outcome: feature adoption hit X% within 60 days / launch campaigns generated [#] MQLs]."

Why

"Showcased" hides what you actually did. This version names the PMM responsibilities and asks you to add a launch outcome.

Priority Order of Fixes

  1. 1.

    Rewrite the profile and add a target role headline. A clear headline plus a concrete profile changes how every recruiter reads the rest.

  2. 2.

    Add product, vertical, and funnel context to your Company 2 bullets. Name the software category, the buyer persona, the regions, and the funnel stage you owned.

  3. 3.

    Cut the soft skills section and rebuild the skills block. Replace "Creativity, Empathy, Problem Solving" with a tools list that includes a marketing automation platform and a CRM.

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An AI model running a prompt written by a recruiter with decades of hiring experience. It's not a human review. But it's a long way from a generic AI rewrite tool, because the prompt forces it to critique the way a senior in your field would. The prompt itself is over 20 pages long.

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